Sketchbook City perspective thoughts? May,2012

Starting work on a finished piece.. I know some people here may frown upon posting here during such early stages of development, but it's my first proper attempt at perspective, so it'd be great to get some critiques before I progress with the artwork.

It will be a city with some sort of devastation event happening in the background and people running in fear. I'm thinking tornado or giant monster. Whatever it is would be placed in the right empty space.

I've played around with perspective a bit and tried to create something that'd suit that mood. I liked the idea of the buildings bending towards the danger, as if they're getting sucked towards it and there's no escape. Not sure if it works though. The first two look better balanced than the third (composition-wise), however I do like how dramatic the third one feels.

Thoughts? I'd love any tips & advice :)

note: obviously it's in the very initial building-block stages. the city will be a lot more alive when it's done

here are three slightly different variations:

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Again, hope this is ok to post. Thanks!
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