Sketchbook NSFW - Sexual Situation Something's off, but what exactly? June,2012

Hey guys. First off, I'd like to thank you all for the great supportive advices. I've learned many things reading other people's trouble and progress. I think I might need some of that right now hehe..

Okay.

I know vectors are not very common around here, but it is the media I like most for what I do. This piece was entirely done in illustrator (including the raster textures which are placed images in corresponding blendmodes and transparencies).

The thing is I can feel there is something off, or lacking, in this piece and I can't point exactly what it is. I just know there is something that will give it the "WOAH!" effect. xD

I think it might have to be with the composition itself (which I'm hopeless if it is). Also, I think the figures don't blend completely with the background. Maybe I'm missing some important aspect on ambience/atmosphere/lightning?

What about the background? I know its very simple, but when I try to give it come complexity I think it steals the attention from the figures. But it does look a bit flat. right?

Or maybe I'm just paranoid.



Some detail...



Thanks
NSFW - Sexual Situation Something's off, but what exactly?

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